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Can't See

Posted on July 29, 2009 by Hollywood

I can't look beond the faint out line of my spread apart fingers

The summers light blinds my vision as I try to remain awake

It is ten o'clock but still light

I am running fast

                              d

                                  o

                                      w

                                           n

a hill

I see a tree

I can't stop

Crash

By B.G.L



Comments:

beautiful

Posted by Anonymous on July 31, 2009 at 01:27 PM PDT #

Haha. It made me smile.

Posted by Camille on August 07, 2009 at 10:22 AM PDT #

very good sounds like one of my poems lol i write them all of the time but I like yours very funny and kool.

Posted by peter on August 10, 2009 at 03:19 PM PDT #

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